Friday, 18 March 2011

STANDING ALONE

I can see the flower upon which my life grows, blooming into a rose.

See the hope and courage in the strength of the petals.
As long as I am, I will be.
The flower will never wilt or die.
As my life grows back, I shall become strong.
I shall become only dependent on one.
That one will be me.
I will rise with my petals high.
My life as a flower will bloom and prosper as I grow.
I may not be the pick of the patch, but I am just as beautiful as the rest.

I will stand as one, but not a lonely soul.
The tears will be far from my smile.......


RUBINA
Posted by at 06:44
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13 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 March 2011 at 07:39

    keep going:) its a very nice start

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  2. Subhash20 March 2011 at 22:49

    Nice expression of self-ispiration ..life is lots to be lived donot worry , God listens to all hearts alike just be positive...nice one ..kep posting !

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  3. starling21 March 2011 at 02:27

    Hai there rubina... well well .. your poem has just reminded me of an old saying from my regional folk tales.. that an girl/female/womenhood... itself is an wonderful metaphor for FLOWER.. like an flower which has to go through different stages in its cycle to reproduce the next cycle, meanwhile the the fragrance, the beauty, the wildness, the gentle tossing heads wen an breeze flows, the naughtiness, standing among many wild entities strong and still untill it ends are met.. the final stage of reproducing fruits and seeds and then grow and glow as an beautiful living things.. wow.. what can i say... dear rubina wen u compared life with rose and blooming flower this is what i felt... though it could have meant for all but my perception just struck this way....


    Stand and face what ever you can... rest all the blessing and wishes always come handy... i WISH U NO MORE tearS should be shed in pain... But an tear wen you are happy n wen ur in glee and gay... I want you to grow cheerful and cherish each moment the way it comes....

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  4. starling21 March 2011 at 03:51

    hi there fnds... i just posted an writeup as an dedication to one of my best buddy... today i am kind of feeling as if im in some whirlpool of turmoil... and yes it has to be coz... the person i wrote for has an ever lasting bond with me....

    And we are just humans.. and this bonds always make us go jerky and fall down at one point of time...

    Life goes on still.... i learnt...

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  5. SHAHBAAZ AHMED21 March 2011 at 22:45

    A Flower Truly Represents What the Beauty is. It Infact is Symbolic Hallmark of Hope and Faith in Life!!
    Rubina! You have Touched Our Heart, MY Little Red Rose....

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  6. rubina142722 March 2011 at 22:34

    Thanks Anu siso, for welcoming me on this blog, it is very nice to find our old mates again gathered in a rendezvous called "BLOGGERS" certainly I hope this place will never disintegrate as Desimartini had done, since it is Google powered site...and we all have high respect for Google...keep writing and entertain us...rubina

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  7. rubina142722 March 2011 at 22:44

    Ashu thank you dear for visiting my blog, and posting your comments...I am glad my poem took you into nostalgia remembering the folklore of your region....we girls, women represent every FLOWER grown in this wilderness called the world, giving fragrance to one and all reminding the nature what beautiful creation God has made of us, as equal to the flowers if not more.... Rubina

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  8. rubina142722 March 2011 at 22:50

    Subhash as ever as ever short and sweet, hope I will find you more in here than ever...
    Shahbaaz you are absolutely correct in describing the FLOWER and its significance as a hallmark of hope and faith in life.... I am blushing indeed when you called me a red rose, thanks friend...Rubina

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  9. Anonymous24 March 2011 at 08:39

    @rubina of course i shall keep writing.. do visit my blog. and i wud love to read ur comments.. follow u.take care :)

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  10. rubina142724 March 2011 at 09:22

    Hey Anu though I was able to visit your blogs I am unable to post my comments kindly help me how I should go about....Rubina

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  11. Anonymous25 March 2011 at 06:25

    first do visit my site here-is-anu-for-exploring-her-feeling.blogspot.com then for example if u read the poem cheers just open the poem by clicking the topic 'cheers'.. u can get the option of post comments downside. and whenever u will click on comments u can get the option of posting comments. very easy.ok keep smiling :)

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  12. The Poet12 February 2012 at 16:03

    My dear Rubina,
    Beautiful indeed!! Women are like flowers. Not all blossom the same with age, color or size, yet they are all beautiful. In fact, each one of them help decorate the garden and heart of the earth with their sweet, sweet perfume scent. This poem was very well written (smile).

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  13. rubina142712 February 2012 at 18:12

    I am honored Andy by your visit to my blog, I have read your poems they are simply the best, making me forget Samuel Taylor Coleridge a romantic poet of 15th century, thank you very much for your encouraging comments...Sir I would like you to visit my website..."My Quotes And My Poems" at www.rubinadcruz.co.cc as I am more active then here, I will think it is my privileged and honored if you do visit...thanks once again...Rubina

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